Hi Darlan.
Congratulations for the work, it seems to us that you have made a beautiful page as final project work. Everything works very well: the story, how it is told, the use of the plane and the vignettes, the page composition (that triangle composition where the vertices at the bottom are increasingly separated is a great narrative and compositional success), the drawing, the use of light, the gray scale, the expression of the characters...
In short, a great job. If you do not dedicate yourself to this professionally, you should start to consider it because, in our opinion, you have a great future.
All the best
MA&Cris
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Congratulations for the work, it seems to us that you have made a beautiful page as final project work. Everything works very well: the story, how it is told, the use of the plane and the vignettes, the page composition (that triangle composition where the vertices at the bottom are increasingly separated is a great narrative and compositional success), the drawing, the use of light, the gray scale, the expression of the characters...
In short, a great job. If you do not dedicate yourself to this professionally, you should start to consider it because, in our opinion, you have a great future.
All the best
MA&Cris
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