good! It's great, congratulations!
I really liked how you have chosen the composition of the scene, we can also perfectly imagine this in a sci-fi movie.
some notes:
- I really liked the main street you have put in and how you have visually united the character with the central building through it.
- the sun on the right would have to have a bit more intensity and what is around it too, is like too dim!
- The ships have a light that does not correspond to the light of the scene, it is as if they illuminated it from the front, when the light comes from behind from the sun. And the same happens to the character's cape, it is illuminated from our view when it should be totally in shadow (minus the reflections of the light from the sword)
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Profesor Plusgood! It's great, congratulations!
I really liked how you have chosen the composition of the scene, we can also perfectly imagine this in a sci-fi movie.
some notes:
- I really liked the main street you have put in and how you have visually united the character with the central building through it.
- the sun on the right would have to have a bit more intensity and what is around it too, is like too dim!
- The ships have a light that does not correspond to the light of the scene, it is as if they illuminated it from the front, when the light comes from behind from the sun. And the same happens to the character's cape, it is illuminated from our view when it should be totally in shadow (minus the reflections of the light from the sword)
Very good job overall! You have to be proud: D
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