First of all congratulations for having made your film! That should already make you feel proud, it's not easy to get projects off the ground.
I see in your piece that there is a control of the cinematographic language, good. Your film is well made visually and there is conflict and a clear dramatic arc in the story
I only have a few comments. At the editing level, there are some conversations that could be a little tighter and better synchronized image and audio. In this aspect, the sound can also be improved. I would try to tell the story in less time, I wonder if the conversation between the two women is necessary, or if it needs to be that long.
In general, I also recommend for the future to follow the steps that I propose in the course, to have at least a written script and treatment to be able to communicate with your team or to be able to explain or sell your film, something that you have not done in your project.
In any case, as I say, congratulations, it's not easy to get movies off the ground. On to the next one!
:)
c
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Profesor PlusHello Rauniel
First of all congratulations for having made your film! That should already make you feel proud, it's not easy to get projects off the ground.
I see in your piece that there is a control of the cinematographic language, good. Your film is well made visually and there is conflict and a clear dramatic arc in the story
I only have a few comments. At the editing level, there are some conversations that could be a little tighter and better synchronized image and audio. In this aspect, the sound can also be improved. I would try to tell the story in less time, I wonder if the conversation between the two women is necessary, or if it needs to be that long.
In general, I also recommend for the future to follow the steps that I propose in the course, to have at least a written script and treatment to be able to communicate with your team or to be able to explain or sell your film, something that you have not done in your project.
In any case, as I say, congratulations, it's not easy to get movies off the ground. On to the next one!
:)
c
displayname515075
hello, thank you very much for watching the short, I would like you to please watch this recent short that I am working on.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DxQw5vxzyL5BkbNh48b0_-j16n_Dyi9p/view?usp=sharing
displayname515075
Hello, thank you very much for watching the short, I would like you to please watch this recent short that I am working on.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DxQw5vxzyL5BkbNh48b0_-j16n_Dyi9p/view?usp=sharing
displayname515075
@C César Pesquera https://youtu.be/MCn-3y_g4C8
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