Hi Maria, congratulations on the project and for having completed the course. I liked the idea of using the pattern of the dress on the guardrails, establishing a visual relationship with the cape. I suggest you do some tests, maybe that track you used in the title isn't necessary, it ended up weighing a little visually. As the illustration has dark colors you would achieve readability in the title as a light color. You could also try to refine some details of the image by making them more delicate, like the branches and the character's face. the pattern of the dress you could try simpler and more graphic shapes to better match the style of the illustration, less a drawing of final lines and more of filled shapes. The title typography is great. Hugs
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Teacher PlusHi Maria, congratulations on the project and for having completed the course. I liked the idea of using the pattern of the dress on the guardrails, establishing a visual relationship with the cape. I suggest you do some tests, maybe that track you used in the title isn't necessary, it ended up weighing a little visually. As the illustration has dark colors you would achieve readability in the title as a light color. You could also try to refine some details of the image by making them more delicate, like the branches and the character's face. the pattern of the dress you could try simpler and more graphic shapes to better match the style of the illustration, less a drawing of final lines and more of filled shapes. The title typography is great. Hugs
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