First of all, congratulations on getting here! We believe that your project shows your great effort and dedication, so we want to give you some points as feedback:
- This parent has a typographical variation, but the hierarchy and its rules must be established. Some compositions feel a bit random, for example the back of the shirt. You have to take care of readability as well.
- We believe that the 3D style of the illustrations is not consistent with the rest of the design, it feels something very different from the rest.
- Good for the color selection.
- Good effort with the use of mockups, but it would be good to give them more naturalness so that they look more real.
In general, we want to congratulate you on the number of applications you are considering for the brand, building the complete identity from its extension pieces.
Thank you for being part of this course!
We wish you the greatest success!
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Teacher PlusHello Carlos!
First of all, congratulations on getting here! We believe that your project shows your great effort and dedication, so we want to give you some points as feedback:
- This parent has a typographical variation, but the hierarchy and its rules must be established. Some compositions feel a bit random, for example the back of the shirt. You have to take care of readability as well.
- We believe that the 3D style of the illustrations is not consistent with the rest of the design, it feels something very different from the rest.
- Good for the color selection.
- Good effort with the use of mockups, but it would be good to give them more naturalness so that they look more real.
In general, we want to congratulate you on the number of applications you are considering for the brand, building the complete identity from its extension pieces.
Thank you for being part of this course!
We wish you the greatest success!
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