@quisbert Thank you for sharing your project and for actively participating in my course! I was delighted to be able to accompany you in the process of your book and see how you were shaping the cow lola! The book is very funny, the color palette you chose contrasts well and gives dynamism to each page, I think you can complement your process by exploring the use of typography and composition, without so many blemishes and with more simplicity in the text, also take a look that the reading order of the last page with the first text below confuses the reading. On the other hand, that we see the Lola cow on all the pages is a resource that is falling short, if you see that the compositions are being repetitive, I recommend that you add an element of surprise, it can be an object that accompanies the character or even another character that complements the story. As the first picture book exercise, you have reached an interesting result in record time!
Best wishes and that you keep in touch with the children's publishing medium. Greetings 👨🎨
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Lehrkraft Plus@quisbert Thank you for sharing your project and for actively participating in my course! I was delighted to be able to accompany you in the process of your book and see how you were shaping the cow lola! The book is very funny, the color palette you chose contrasts well and gives dynamism to each page, I think you can complement your process by exploring the use of typography and composition, without so many blemishes and with more simplicity in the text, also take a look that the reading order of the last page with the first text below confuses the reading. On the other hand, that we see the Lola cow on all the pages is a resource that is falling short, if you see that the compositions are being repetitive, I recommend that you add an element of surprise, it can be an object that accompanies the character or even another character that complements the story. As the first picture book exercise, you have reached an interesting result in record time!
Best wishes and that you keep in touch with the children's publishing medium. Greetings 👨🎨
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Thanks if that of the character is true I will make the necessary changes
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