The text is more or less well-written. The problem I see is that there is an incorrect use of commas. Sometimes they appear in excess and other times by default. You have to keep in mind that the commas we write are not necessarily the ones we pronounce (and vice versa). My recommendation is that you read this article that I am sending you. Don't take it the wrong way, since what it says is very interesting and makes us reflect: https://www.yorokobu.es/no-uses-las-comas-como-una-persona-estupida/. I also recommend the book Impossible forgiveness: guide to richer and more conscious punctuation, by José Antonio Millán.
That's the only mistake I found, but the text is generally fine. With a few minor corrections, you've got it almost perfect. Congratulations on your videos!
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The text is more or less well-written. The problem I see is that there is an incorrect use of commas. Sometimes they appear in excess and other times by default. You have to keep in mind that the commas we write are not necessarily the ones we pronounce (and vice versa). My recommendation is that you read this article that I am sending you. Don't take it the wrong way, since what it says is very interesting and makes us reflect: https://www.yorokobu.es/no-uses-las-comas-como-una-persona-estupida/. I also recommend the book Impossible forgiveness: guide to richer and more conscious punctuation, by José Antonio Millán.
That's the only mistake I found, but the text is generally fine. With a few minor corrections, you've got it almost perfect. Congratulations on your videos!
All the best,
Rachel
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