The composition is fine but the disruptive element (the girl) is not integrated into the scene in color or lighting, which makes it look like a flat sticker that lacks volume.
If that was your intention, I understand and respect it; but it is not what is assigned as the final exercise of the course where the objective is to integrate one or more elements to a scene and make it look as natural as possible.
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Lehrkraft PlusThe composition is fine but the disruptive element (the girl) is not integrated into the scene in color or lighting, which makes it look like a flat sticker that lacks volume.
If that was your intention, I understand and respect it; but it is not what is assigned as the final exercise of the course where the objective is to integrate one or more elements to a scene and make it look as natural as possible.
CJ.
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